Как и обещал, здесь будет список. Эффективнее всего будет пройтись по каждому файлу с указанием строки, где допущена ошибка или неправильное написание, или же общих моментов.
От A до B:
Во всех диалогах стоит заменить " . . ." на "..."
AIRGRD.MSG - неправильный знак и кавычки не там стоят
{134}{}{What kind of foolish bigotry is that, we are 'humanity.' We're just
as human as you are.}
ANDREW.MSG - пропущена запятая
{106}{}{No thanks.}
ARADESH; " . . ." -> "..."
{1108}{Ara_58}{Yes, yes. yes. It is a rumor of a monster created
during the War.}
BARRACUS
{139}{}{Fine. You want to play it straight? Sometimes killing's necessary.
Sometimes I even like it. But I hear you love killing . . . all the time.
Every time I've met a psycho, either he dies, or Ton dies. Ton is
still here. So why don't you go elsewhere.}
BITSBOB " " -> " "
BOSLORI
{111}{}{ You seem fine.} - лишний пробел
{147}{}{I'm sorry I can't help you if you don't have the money.} - пропущена запятая
{413}{}{There you go. All better} - отсутствует точка
BROELD - отсутствуют знаки препинания
{105}{}{Good day Initiate}
BYCHRIS - отсутствуют знаки препинания
{106}{}{No Thanks.}
{117}{}{No I'm not your Mommie. Now run along and play.}
BYGREG
{102}{}{What? Why are you talking to me? They'll hear you know.} - пропущена запятая
{103}{}{Hi, your back. Don't talk so loud, they're out there.}
BYMIKE " " -> " "